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O-LevelEnglish LanguageSummary Writing1123/11 · May/June 2025 · Q325 Marks

Read Text B, Swimming pools, in the insert and answer Question 3.

  1. (a)Summarise the benefits and attractions of different kinds of swimming pools, according to Text B. You must use continuous writing (not note form). Use your own words as far as possible. Avoid copying long sections of the text. Your summary should be no more than 150 words. Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 10 marks for the quality of your writing.[20]
  2. (b)Imagine you are Ted, the neighbour who refused the offer to use Mario's swimming pool. Mario is surprised and wants to understand your reasons. Mario asks you a question. Give your answer to Mario's question, using information from the text. Mario's question: I think that sharing my swimming pool is an environmentally friendly thing to do. What is your opinion and why? Ted's answer:[5]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2025). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. [1] (a) (Content) learn to swim / have lessons // learn lifesaving / essential skill
  2. [1] (a) (Content) swim / have fun with friends // socialise // share (pool)
  3. [1] (a) (Content) reasonably priced / cheap (exercise) // free swim (neighbour's pool)
  4. [1] (a) (Content) workout / fitness / exercise / health benefits
  5. [1] (a) (Content) holiday / tourist accommodation / hotel (with pool)
  6. [1] (a) (Content) relaxing
  7. [1] (a) (Content) private / home pool is a luxury / indulgence / status symbol / opportunity to show off
  8. [1] (a) (Content) indoor pools mean you can swim all year / all the time
  9. [1] (a) (Content) an eco-pool can be sustainable / chemical-free / low-tech // a sustainable pool can be chemical-free / low-tech / eco-friendly
  10. [1] (a) (Content) eco-pools can be cheaper to run // natural purification can be cheaper
  11. [1] (a) (Content) eco-pools / natural purification enrich the pool with oxygen / support beneficial bacteria / support eco-system / provide habitat / are good for aquatic life / wildlife
  12. [1] (a) (Content) natural cleaning agents / alternatives to chemical cleaners reduce water consumption / the need to clean / (re-)fill frequently
  13. [Level 5: 9-10 marks] (a) (Writing) A relevant response that is expressed clearly, fluently and mostly with concision. The response is well organised (W2). The response is the candidate's own words and/or structures where appropriate with a range of vocabulary which clarifies meaning (W3).
  14. [Level 4: 7-8 marks] (a) (Writing) A relevant response that is expressed clearly with some areas of concision. The response is organised (W2). The response is the candidate's own words and/or structures where appropriate (W3).
  15. [Level 3: 5-6 marks] (a) (Writing) A relevant response that is generally expressed clearly. There is some evidence of organisation (W2). The response is mainly the candidate's own words and/or structures where appropriate (W3).
  16. [Level 2: 3-4 marks] (a) (Writing) A relevant response that can generally be followed. There are areas of the response expressed in the candidate's own words and/or structures (W2 and W3).
  17. [Level 1: 1-2 marks] (a) (Writing) The response lacks clarity. There may be long explanations or the response may be brief (W2). There is occasional use of own words and/or structures (W3).
  18. [Level 0: 0 marks] (a) (Writing) No creditable content.
  19. [1] (b) (Supporting detail) global water scarcity / droughts // a precious resource // has to clean / empty and re-fill pool frequently
  20. [DEV] (b) (Development for global water scarcity) private pool uses massive amount of water / selfish when world faces drought / waste of water / could save water by using natural alternatives
  21. [1] (b) (Supporting detail) a luxury / indulgence / status symbol
  22. [DEV] (b) (Development for luxury/indulgence) an opportunity to show off rather than help the environment / chose an expensive (conventional) pool / irresponsible spending
  23. [1] (b) (Supporting detail) pool uses chemicals / chlorine // chemicals / chlorine cause dry skin / green hair // there are alternative cleaning agents / filtering systems
  24. [DEV] (b) (Development for pool uses chemicals) bad for health / wildlife / cause pollution // ignored the alternative natural methods // Mario should have done more research // needs careful monitoring or water is unclean / dangerous
  25. [1] (b) (Supporting detail) man-made pool is bad / not sustainable // (Ted) cares too much about the environment
  26. [DEV] (b) (Development for man-made pool is bad) a private pool is unnecessary // wild swimming / swimming in natural environment is preferable
  27. [1] (b) (Supporting detail) heat so much / a lot of water // not solar heated
  28. [DEV] (b) (Development for heat so much) does not use green energy / could have opted for solar heating / wastes energy

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Topic
Summary Writing, O-Level English Language (syllabus 1123). Structured question, 25 marks.
Source
O-Level English Language, May/June 2025 Paper 1 Variant 1, question 3.

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