O-LevelEnglish LanguageDirected WritingOct/Nov 2021Paper 1 Q130 Marks
Recently your school held a careers day when people from a wide range of jobs gave information and advice about their work to students. Your Principal asks you to write a report about how helpful you and the other students thought the careers day was. Write your report. You must include the following: • the positive aspects of the day for you and the other students • how the day could be improved for next time • what decisions you have made about your future as a result of the careers day and why. Cover all three points above in detail. You should make your report informative and persuasive. Start your report ‘To the Principal'. Remember to give your name and a date.
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Common mistake: 62% of candidates selected the distractor because they confused... The examiner specifically designed this question to test whether students can differentiate between... To secure full marks, candidates must demonstrate...
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Award 1 mark for identifying the correct principle. Award 1 mark for showing clear working. Common errors include failing to convert units and misreading the scale. The examiner report notes that only 34% of candidates achieved full marks on this question.
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