O-LevelEnglish LanguageSummary Writing1123/12 · May/June 2024 · Q325 Marks

Read Text B, The Authentic Travel company, in the insert and answer Question 3.

(a)Summarise what Bob Hunter thinks would appeal to customers booking a holiday with his travel company, according to Text B. You must use continuous writing (not note form). Use your own words as far as possible. Avoid copying long sections of the text. Your summary should be no more than 150 words. Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 10 marks for the quality of your writing.[20]
(b)Imagine you are someone who lives in a city and has recently been on holiday at a 'black-hole resort'. You really enjoyed your stay. You are asked to give feedback about your holiday in a survey. Give your answer to the survey question, using information from the text. The survey question: Some people think that a holiday at a ‘black-hole resort' would be boring. What is your opinion and why? Your answer:[5]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2024). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

[10] (a) founded in 1989 // (well) established // has been around for decades; small(er) group; authentic / genuine / real experience // experience different culture / local people / realities of everyday life; available globally / in 130 countries // a variety of destinations; local guides; not alone // feel (more) confident / supported / safe; organise (difficult / time-consuming) things / healthcare / essentials; clean / hygienic / comfortable / relaxing hotels / guesthouses // good standard of accommodation; flexibility in schedule // can join in with the group (when they want); (many) activities need a group; activities are (more) affordable with/in a group; special interest travel // tour of (European) railway lines // foodie trips
[5] (b) A1: You did not find the holiday boring / you enjoyed your holiday because: it was basic / off-grid / simple [development: eco-friendly // interesting / welcome contrast with city // a deliberate choice of holiday]; real life experience / mindful travel [development: opportunity to observe what is there / be aware of your surroundings]; it is a new trend / a fashionable kind of place to go [development: can't be boring if becoming more popular / so many people want to go]; mobile phones don't work / can't get online there [development: welcome break from pressures and responsibilities // digital detox]; do nothing for a week [development: relaxing // opportunity for a busy person to recharge / destress // not constantly moving on // don't want an activity-packed holiday]