F. SCOTT FITZGERALD: The Great Gatsby 31 Read the following extract, and then answer the question that follows it: There was music from my neighbour's house through the summer nights. In his blue gardens men and girls came and went like moths among the whisperings and the champagne and the stars. At high tide in the afternoon I watched his guests diving from the tower of his raft, or taking the sun on the hot sand of his beach while his two motor-boats slit the waters of the Sound, drawing aquaplanes over cataracts of foam. On weekends his Rolls-Royce became an omnibus, bearing parties to and from the city between nine in the morning and long past midnight, while his station wagon scampered like a brisk yellow bug to meet all trains. And on Mondays eight servants, including an extra gardener, toiled all day with mops and scrubbing-brushes and hammers and garden-shears, repairing the ravages of the night before. Every Friday five crates of oranges and lemons arrived from a fruiterer in New York – every Monday these same oranges and lemons left his back door in a pyramid of pulpless halves. There was a machine in the kitchen which could extract the juice of two hundred oranges in half an hour if a little button was pressed two hundred times by a butler's thumb. At least once a fortnight a corps of caterers came down with several hundred feet of canvas and enough coloured lights to make a Christmas tree of Gatsby's enormous garden. On buffet tables, garnished with glistening hors-d'oeuvre, spiced baked hams crowded against salads of harlequin designs and pastry pigs and turkeys bewitched to a dark gold. In the main hall a bar with a real brass rail was set up, and stocked with gins and liquors and with cordials so long forgotten that most of his female guests were too young to know one from another. By seven o'clock the orchestra has arrived, no thin five-piece affair, but a whole pitful of oboes and trombones and saxophones and viols and cornets and piccolos, and low and high drums. The last swimmers have come in from the beach now and are dressing upstairs; the cars from New York are parked five deep in the drive, and already the halls and salons and verandas are gaudy with primary colours, and hair bobbed in strange new ways, and shawls beyond the dreams of Castile. The bar is in full swing, and floating rounds of cocktails permeate the garden outside, until the air is alive with chatter and laughter, and casual innuendo and introductions forgotten on the spot, and enthusiastic meetings between women who never knew each other's names. The lights grow brighter as the earth lurches away from the sun, and now the orchestra is playing yellow cocktail music, and the opera of voices pitches a key higher. Laughter is easier minute by minute, spilled with prodigality, tipped out at a cheerful word. The groups change more swiftly, swell with new arrivals, dissolve and form in the same breath; already there are wanderers, confident girls who weave here and there among the stouter and more stable, become for a sharp, joyous moment the center of a group, and then, excited with triumph, glide on through the sea-change of faces and voices and color under the constantly changing light. Suddenly one of these gypsies, in trembling opal, seizes a cocktail out of the air, dumps it down for courage and, moving her hands like Frisco, dances out alone on the canvas platform. A momentary hush; the orchestra leader varies his rhythm obligingly for her, and there is a burst of chatter as the erroneous news goes around that she is Gilda Gray’s understudy from the Follies. The party has begun. 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 40 45 50 What striking impressions of Gatsby's grand party does Fitzgerald's writing convey to you in this passage?
- What striking impressions of Gatsby's grand party does Fitzgerald's writing convey to you in this passage?[25]
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Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2011). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- Candidates should explore the striking impressions conveyed by Fitzgerald’s writing about Gatsby’s party in this passage.
- Focus on the sheer scale and extravagance of the parties ('blue gardens', 'Rolls-Royce became an omnibus', 'corps of caterers', full orchestra).
- The sense of superficiality and anonymity among the guests ('came and went like moths', 'forgotten on the spot', 'never knew each other's names').
- The vivid sensory details (music, champagne, lights, food, chatter, laughter) that create a vibrant but chaotic atmosphere.
- The underlying emptiness or loneliness despite the opulence, hinting at Gatsby’s isolation.
- The impression of the Jazz Age excess and moral decay.
- Fitzgerald’s use of rich imagery, similes ('like moths', 'like a brisk yellow bug'), hyperbole, and cumulative description to build this impression.
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