BESSIE HEAD: When Rain Clouds Gather Read this extract, and then answer the question that follows it: Matenge had not expected this. He stood in the shadow of his enclosed porch, watching the crowd. When they turned and walked towards the gate of his yard, he retreated indoors, in panic, running from window to window and door to door, barricading himself inside. The servants, observing his panic, crept like stricken shadows out of the backdoor and fled into the bush. He was left alone with his panic, in a dark, locked house. He walked to one of the windows and looked down into the yard. The villagers had all seated themselves on the ground, with their faces turned expectantly towards the house, waiting for him to come out. And they would wait and wait and wait now because this was the end of the road for them and Matenge. Big, slow tears rolled down the rutted grooves of his cheeks as he stood there, watching them. 5 10 Why did he cry? The greatest moments of his life had been when he had inflicted suffering on his fellow men. People were not people to him but things he kicked about, pawns to be used by him, to break, banish and destroy for his entertainment. That was the tradition in which he had grown up, and maybe he could not be blamed for taking full advantage of it. Most chiefs were half Matenge and half of the casual charm of his brother, and they lived on their own weird tightrope as fathers of the people. Half the time they turned on the charm, just in the nick of time to save themselves from damnation. But they were all an evil, cruel crowd. Only Matenge had not known how to turn on the charm to save himself. 15 20 Was he crying now because, for the first time in his life, he was feeling what it must be like to face a tomorrow without any future? That was what those upturned faces meant. He would have to go away. They weren't going to tolerate a man like him any longer because he would not give way nor understand that they needed co-operation from the man at the top to whom everyone had to go for permission to progress. The Matenges and Paramount Chief Sekotos did not have to lift up the spades and dig the earth. It cost them nothing to say yes, yes, yes, build your dam because we have no water in this country. But it gave them a deep and perverted joy to say no, no, no. The end of it was that Matenge had to barricade himself up, not because the villagers were about to rise up and tear him to shreds, but because he was an evil pervert and knew it. Only you could not understand why a man like that stood there crying like a forlorn and lonely child. 25 30 35 In what ways does Head make this extract a particularly satisfying moment for you?
- (a)In what ways does Head make this extract a particularly satisfying moment for you?[25]
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- [25] Though there is no direct requirement to go outside the passage here, it will be difficult for candidates to score very highly unless they makes some reference to the impressions of Matenge that are built up in the earlier parts of the novel.
- [25] In fact Bessie Head gives us a good summary here of his evilness and tyranny and of how this is representative of his type.
- [25] In this extract the village has at last united to move against him and he is afraid for his life, though there is no specific indication that the villagers intend violence, in fact there is an atmosphere of exultation amongst them that they are finally going to face him and stand firm.
- [25] It is impossible to feel pity for him in his panic and despair, in fact it is contemptible that he reacts as a 'frightened lonely child', who does not seem to understand what he has done or to take responsibility for it.
- [25] Candidates may well go on to refer to his suicide, which follows very quickly and before anyone from the village has the chance to speak to him perhaps the ultimate cowardly act.
- [25] Good answers will refer very closely to the passage and will consider the way in which Head uses language to vividly convey Matenge's state of mind, and to reflect on the reasons why he is as he is.
- [25] Refer to the band descriptors in arriving at your mark.
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