You are Gabriel shortly after Bathsheba has agreed to marry you. Write your thoughts.
- (a)You are Gabriel shortly after Bathsheba has agreed to marry you. Write your thoughts.[25]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2010). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [25] Gabriel has had considerable experience of personal relationships since the beginning of the novel and his first encounter with Bathsheba.
- [25] Candidates will be expected to bear this in mind as they take on the role.
- [25] He will not be starry-eyed or a clichéd romantic hero.
- [25] He will surely reflect maturely on his past dealings with Bathsheba and perhaps comment on the vicissitudes of life they have both endured.
- [25] This will be a mature, measured and reflective Gabriel who will feel the joy of happiness finally attained.
- [25] He may well consider their working together in the estate and using their knowledge and interests to create a fulfilling life with each other.
- [25] Authenticity of voice will be crucial in deciding the level of reward to be awarded.
- [25] Textual echoes and familiarity with the detail from the novel will contribute significantly.
- [25] Refer to the band descriptors in arriving at your mark.
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