ANITA DESAI: Fire on the Mountain Remember to support your ideas with details from the writing. Read this passage, and then answer the question that follows it: Raka sprang from the house as if shot out by a gun. Content removed due to copyright restrictions. It was the ravaged, destroyed and barren spaces in Kasauli that drew her: the ravine where yellow snakes slept under grey rocks and agaves growing out of the dust and rubble, the skeletal pines that rattled in the wind, the wind-levelled hill-tops and the seared remains of the safe, cosy, civilized world in which Raka had no part and to which she owed no attachment. (from Part 2, Chapter 18) In what ways does Desai vividly convey Raka's thoughts and feelings at this moment in the novel?
- In what ways does Desai vividly convey Raka's thoughts and feelings at this moment in the novel?[25]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2025). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [23-25] demonstrates knowledge by incorporating well-selected reference to the text skilfully and with flair (AO1)
- [23-25] sustains a critical understanding of the text showing individuality and insight (AO2)
- [23-25] responds sensitively and in considerable detail to the way the writer achieves her/his effects (AO3)
- [23-25] sustains personal and evaluative engagement with task and text (AO4)
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