Read the following text, which is an extract from an article from an online sports magazine, featuring an interview with South African cricketer Shabnim Ismail. Analyse the text, focusing on form, structure and language.
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Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2024). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [0] the typical text conventions used in the article
- [0] the ways in which the purpose affects the content and style of the text
- [0] the ways in which the article appeals to its intended audience, e.g. through the tone and register used in the text
- [0] any other relevant aspects of the form
- [0] the use of a title to introduce the article
- [0] the way in which the opening paragraph introduces the interviewee
- [0] the way in which the text is structured to engage the reader and hold their interest
- [0] the way in which the article is structured non-chronologically to build up a picture of Shabnim's prowess in cricket
- [0] anecdotes and the shifts between these and the interviewer
- [0] any other relevant structural features in the text
- [0] the pun in the title fast times
- [0] the contrasts in the subtitle From playing in the streets with boys to becoming a speed demon feared by batters across the world
- [0] direct address at the beginning of the article to engage the reader You wouldn't be surprised
- [0] anecdotes with familiar vocabulary (e.g. repetition of different) giving a homespun feel
- [0] colloquialisms e.g. vibe, rag
- [0] references to Shabnim being competitive e.g. there to be the best, a competitor, passion and resourcefulness
- [0] vocabulary related to speed faster and faster, speed demon
- [0] (limited) lexical field related to cricket (e.g. batter, bowler, series) and how this contrasts with more familiar vocabulary
- [0] the tension in the friendly boy-girl rivalry I was just a little girl, he used to hate that about me, playing with the boys definitely made me stronger
- [0] emphatic alliteration coaxed, cricket, coaching, cultivating
- [0] language showing the relationship between Shabnim, her mother and family, e.g., mom is my role model, I've got all of her genes inside of me
- [0] any other relevant language features in the text.
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