In the following passage from his autobiography, Sooyong Park writes about his search for the elusive white tiger in Siberia.
- (a)Comment on the language and style of the passage.[15]
- (b)A reporter for an international environmental organisation writes a formal report on the first sighting of Mary, the rare white tigress. Basing your writing closely on the material of the original passage, and using between 120 and 150 of your own words, write the opening of the report.[10]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2019). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [13-15] (a) Shows perceptive appreciation of content and ideas.
- [13-15] (a) Fluidly relates content to structure, form, audience, purpose, genre, style.
- [13-15] (a) Shows keen awareness of intentions of passage.
- [13-15] (a) Analyses text with sensitive and discriminating awareness of how language creates effects.
- [13-15] (a) Moves with ease between part and whole in discussing specific examples of language use and the effect of the whole passage.
- [13-15] (a) Strong structure; may be concise; quotation is used fluently, 'embedded' in the argument.
- [8-10] (b) A perceptive recognition of context, audience, form, and purpose supported by a good range of appropriate vocabulary and expression suitable for the task.
- [8-10] (b) Responses at the top of this band will be persuasive and confident, supported by a consistent, and at best personal, engagement with context and purpose, using fluent and accurate expression accompanied by a strong sense of audience.
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