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A-LevelEnglish LanguageDirected writing9093/12 · Feb/Mar 2017 · Q125 Marks

The following extract is taken from the novel The Namesake by Jhumpa Lahiri. Gogol and Sonia have been brought up in America and are now visiting India with their parents (Ashoke and Ashima) for the first time.

  1. (a)Comment on the style and language of the extract and the ways in which it conveys the children's reactions to the situation.[15]
  2. (b)The children's mother keeps a diary of the visit, noting in particular her own feelings about seeing her children in a new place. Write a section (120–150 words) of her diary. Base your answer closely on the material of the original extract.[10]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (Feb/Mar 2017). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. [15] Knowledge and Understanding: Shows perceptive appreciation of content and ideas. Fluidly relates content to structure, form, audience, purpose, genre, style. Shows keen awareness of intentions of passage.
  2. [15] Analysis of language effects: Analyses text with sensitive and discriminating awareness of how language creates effects. Moves with ease between part and whole in discussing specific examples of language use and the effect of the whole passage.
  3. [15] Organisation: Strong structure; may be concise; quotation is used fluently, 'embedded' in the argument.
  4. [10] A perceptive recognition of context, audience, form, and purpose supported by a good range of appropriate vocabulary and expression suitable for the task. Responses at the top of this band will be persuasive and confident, supported by a consistent, and at best personal, engagement with context and purpose, using fluent and accurate expression accompanied by a strong sense of audience.

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Topic
Directed writing, A-Level English Language (syllabus 9093). Structured question, 25 marks.
Source
A-Level English Language, Feb/Mar 2017 Paper 1 Variant 2, question 1.

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