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O-LevelEnglish LanguageDirected Writing1123/11 · May/June 2016 · Q130 Marks

Your school has built a new sports centre. A former pupil of your school, now a famous sports star, has been invited to open the new centre. Your Principal has asked you to make a speech at the official opening to welcome the sports star and introduce the centre to teachers and pupils.

  1. (a)Write your speech. You must include the following: • an introduction to the sports star and his or her achievements • a description of the new centre and its facilities • the benefits to the school that the centre will bring and an expression of thanks to the sports star. Cover all three points above in detail. You should make sure your speech is polite and informative. Start your speech ‘Teachers and fellow students,...'.[30]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2016). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. The 30 marks are allocated as follows: Task Fulfilment 15 marks, Language 15 marks.
  2. N.B. Assessing task fulfilment means more than including the bullet/content points.
  3. N.B. Candidates who address only two points must be in Band 3 or below for TF.
  4. Band 1 (15-13 marks) • Good understanding of purpose. • Clear awareness of situation and audience. • Format entirely appropriate. • All required points developed in detail, fully amplified and well organised. • Given information well used to justify personal opinion and interpretation. • Tone and register entirely appropriate.
  5. Band 1 (15-14 marks) • Highly accurate, apart from very occasional slips. • Sentence structures varied for particular effects. • Verb forms largely correct and appropriate tenses consistently used. • Vocabulary wide and precise. • Punctuation accurate and helpful. • Spelling accurate, apart from very occasional slips. • Paragraphs have unity, are linked, and show evidence of planning.

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Topic
Directed Writing, O-Level English Language (syllabus 1123). Structured question, 30 marks.
Source
O-Level English Language, May/June 2016 Paper 1 Variant 1, question 1.

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