Read the following text, which is an article about how scientists plan to build biocomputers to emulate the human brain.
- Analyse the text, focusing on form, structure and language.[25]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2025). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- The typical text conventions used in the extract
- The ways in which the purpose affects the content and style of the text
- The ways in which the extract appeals to its intended audience, e.g. through the tone and register used in the text
- any other relevant aspect of the text's form
- The ways in which paragraphs are constructed and sequenced in the text
- The ways in which ideas are developed
- Varying paragraph length and how this enables the writer to develop certain points in depth/detail, or make high impact points for dramatic effect
- The use of discourse markers for organisation/cohesion
- The use of a range of cohesive devices – tense agreement, anaphoric/cataphoric refences, substitution, etc
- Any other relevant structural features of the text.
- Fully explanatory title and subheading
- The use of lexis related to human brain capacity: emulate, variety of achievements
- Quotations from experts in the field and reference to Frontiers in science journal lend validity to the article
- The use of the metaphor/collective noun: host of researchers and repetition of host
- The use of facts and figures and factual language indicate a serious topic
- Lexis to suggest this is a new and exciting development: new frontier, rapid development, scale it up, a community of top scientists, a new era
- Use of the triad to enhance the positive impression: fast, powerful and efficient biocomputing
- Reference to further positive impacts of the new biocomputers: learn much more quickly, be more efficient, help tell us more about the brains that inspired them, ethical and socially responsible
- Any other relevant language features of the text.
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