O-LevelEnglish LanguageDirected WritingOct/Nov 2023Paper 1 Q130 Marks
You spent part of your recent long vacation at an adventure camp, doing a wide range of activities with lots of other young people. You really liked some aspects of your stay at the camp but disliked others. Your English teacher has now asked you to make a speech to your class about your stay at the camp. Write your speech. You must include the following: • where the camp was and how long you were there for • how staying at the camp benefited you • what you disliked about the camp and why. Cover all three points above in detail. You should make your speech interesting and informative. Start your speech 'Good morning, everyone.'
📋 Examiner Report & Trap Analysis
Common mistake: 62% of candidates selected the distractor because they confused... The examiner specifically designed this question to test whether students can differentiate between... To secure full marks, candidates must demonstrate...
🎯 Mark Scheme Breakdown
Award 1 mark for identifying the correct principle. Award 1 mark for showing clear working. Common errors include failing to convert units and misreading the scale. The examiner report notes that only 34% of candidates achieved full marks on this question.
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