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O-LevelEnglish LanguageComposition1123/11 · Oct/Nov 2021 · Q530 Marks

Write a story which includes the sentence: 'When she asked why I was so nervous about going there, I didn't know what to say.'

  1. (a)Write a story which includes the sentence: 'When she asked why I was so nervous about going there, I didn't know what to say.'[30]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2021). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. [30] Fulfilling the requirements of the narrative composition task as described in the question prompt. Awarded for accurate use of language and relevant content.

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Topic
Composition, O-Level English Language (syllabus 1123). Structured question, 30 marks.
Source
O-Level English Language, Oct/Nov 2021 Paper 1 Variant 1, question 5.

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