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O-LevelEnglish LanguageComposition1123/11 · May/June 2014 · Q630 Marks

Write a story in which forgiving someone plays an important part.

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2014). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. [30] Creative Writing (Band 1): Highly accurate, apart from very occasional slips; Sentence structure varied for particular effects; Verb forms largely correct and appropriate tenses consistently used; Vocabulary wide and precise; Punctuation accurate and helpful; Spelling accurate apart from very occasional slips; Paragraphs have unity, are linked, and show evidence of planning; Consistently relevant; Interest aroused and sustained; Tone and register entirely appropriate; Discursive essays are well developed, logical, even complex, in argument; Descriptive essays have well-developed images helping to create complex atmospheres; Narratives are complex, sophisticated, possibly tense, and may contain devices such as flashbacks.

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About this question

Topic
Composition, O-Level English Language (syllabus 1123). Structured question, 30 marks.
Source
O-Level English Language, May/June 2014 Paper 1 Variant 1, question 6.

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