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O-LevelEnglish LanguageSummary Writing1123/11 · May/June 2024 · Q325 Marks

Read Text B, Plogging, in the insert and answer Question 3.

  1. (a)Summarise the benefits and attractions of 'plogging', according to Text B. You must use continuous writing (not note form). Use your own words as far as possible. Avoid copying long sections of the text. Your summary should be no more than 150 words. Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 10 marks for the quality of your writing.[20]
  2. (b)Imagine you are environmental campaigner Anna Ruiz. You are giving a talk to a local community group about how to deal with the problem of litter in their area. Someone in the audience asks you a question. Give your answer to their question, using information from the text. Question from the audience: The best way to deal with the problem of litter in this area is to encourage more people to go plogging. What is your opinion and why? Anna Ruiz's answer:[5]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2024). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. INDICATIVE READING CONTENT Candidates may refer to any of the points below: 1 makes natural scenery / natural environment pleasant / beautiful 2 protects / helps ecosystem / wildlife / nature 3 fitness trend / get fit 4 (do it) with a (local) community / in a group 5 makes a noticeable difference // helps solve a big problem // has a huge impact 6 (going outside in nature makes) people feel good // mental health benefits // positively affects well-being 7 (time in nature) improves heart rate / blood pressure / immune functioning // physical / health benefits 8 part of human nature // emulates (human) body mechanics 9 (do it) as a family 10 teaches children the importance of looking after environment // a school project 11 can do it anywhere / anytime //convenient 12 (eco-minded) influencers / social media celebrities do it 13 fusion / combination of exercise / taking care of the body and environmental action / caring for the environment Table R, Reading: Use the following table to give a mark out of 10 for reading. Level Marks Description 5 9–10 • A wide range of relevant ideas. (R1) • Ideas are skilfully selected and used. (R5) 4 7–8 • A good range of relevant ideas. (R1) • Ideas are carefully selected and used. (R5) 3 5–6 • A range of relevant ideas. (R1) • Relevant ideas selected; may include excess material. (R5) 2 3–4 Some relevant ideas used; may include indiscriminate selection. (R1 and R5) 1 1–2 • Some ideas referred to; limited evidence of selection. (R1and R5) 0 0 • No creditable content. Table W, Writing: Use the following table to give a mark out of 10 for writing. Level Marks Description 5 9–10 A relevant response that is expressed clearly, fluently and mostly with concision. • The response is well organised. (W2) • The response is the candidate's own words and/or structures where appropriate with a range of vocabulary which clarifies meaning. (W3) 4 7–8 A relevant response that is expressed clearly with some areas of concision. • The response is organised. (W2) • The response is the candidate's own words and/or structures where appropriate. (W3) 3 5–6 A relevant response that is generally expressed clearly. • There is some evidence of organisation. (W2) • The response is mainly the candidate's own words and/or structures where appropriate. (W3) 2 3–4 A relevant response that can generally be followed. • There are areas of the response expressed in the candidate's own words and/or structures. (W2 and W3) 1 1–2 The response lacks clarity. • There may be long explanations or the response may be brief. (W2) • There is occasional use of own words and/or structures. (W3) 0 0 • No creditable content.
  2. Indicative Content Responses might use any of the following ideas: A1: Anna Ruiz believes plogging is not the best way / insufficient because: • multipronged effort required / review laws [development: law to act as a deterrent / ban single-use plastic] • massive problem / waste epidemic [development: won't deal with the whole issue] • the problem begins much earlier [development: need to look to what causes litter] • role of businesses / customers [development: take responsibility / use takeaway cups, plastic bottles / recycle / put own rubbish in the bin] • consumption habits [development: use less / see the bigger picture; prevent rather than cure] • expecting others to use their free time [development: should be able to enjoy leisure activities in clean and unspoilt environments] • expecting others to pick up your mess [development: not the right message / put own rubbish in the bin] Table R, Reading: Use the following table to give a mark out of 5 for reading. Level Marks Description 3 4–5 • Consistent and relevant perspective offered. • Ideas are developed and supported. 2 2–3 • Generally relevant perspective offered. • Some attempt to support or develop. 1 1 • Some awareness of opinion or attitude. 0 0 • No creditable content.

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Topic
Summary Writing, O-Level English Language (syllabus 1123). Structured question, 25 marks.
Source
O-Level English Language, May/June 2024 Paper 1 Variant 1, question 3.

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