O-LevelEnglish LanguageDirected Writing1123/12 · May/June 2019 · Q130 Marks
Section 1: Directed Writing You are advised to write between 200 and 300 words. Total marks for this part: 30. • You will be awarded up to 15 marks for following the task instructions. • You will be awarded up to 15 marks for the language you use. Task 1 There have been many problems with the public transport in your area. These problems have made travelling difficult. You decide to write a letter to the Editor of the local newspaper to explain how unhappy you are with the present situation.
- (a)Write your letter. You must include the following: • details of the problems with the public transport in your area • an example of when and how you were affected • what you think should be done to improve the situation. Cover all three points above in detail. You should make your letter polite and informative. Start your letter 'Dear Editor', and remember to supply a suitable ending.[30]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2019). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [15] (Task Fulfilment) Candidates are expected to write between 200 and 300 words, write a letter which communicates information clearly, accurately and economically, and carry out the instructions as detailed on the question paper regarding the particular information required (details of the problems with the public transport in your area; an example of when and how you were affected; what you think should be done to improve the situation). All three points should be covered in detail. The letter should be polite and informative, start 'Dear Editor', and supply a suitable ending.
- [15] (Language) Candidates will be awarded marks for the language used, assessed against generic language band descriptors.
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