From paragraph 5
- (a)The fire was 'eating its way' to the roof. What effect is created here that would not be created by, for example, the word 'burned'?[1]
- (b)The fire had gone out 'around midnight'. Why do you think 'it was dawn' before the men began to leave?[1]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2016). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [1] The fire was systematic / purposeful / destroyed everything (in its path) OR idea of personality e.g. the fire was merciless / cruel / pitiless / remorseless / relentless / unstoppable / ferocious / aggressive
- [1] they wanted to be sure the fire was out // it took a long time to be sure that the fire was out // they wanted to be sure another fire didn't start // they were worried another fire might /would start // they wanted to be sure it was safe to leave
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