You are Margaret. Your father, Jack, has died and left his wealth to your daughter, Jackie. Write your thoughts.
- You are Margaret. Your father, Jack, has died and left his wealth to your daughter, Jackie. Write your thoughts.[25]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2011). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- Candidates should adopt the persona of Margaret and explore her feelings about Jack’s death and the inheritance going to Jackie.
- Good answers will reflect Margaret’s complex emotions: grief for her father, resentment/jealousy towards Jackie, bitterness towards her mother, and her own sense of loss and sacrifice.
- She might reflect on her own relationship with Jack and the expectations she had.
- Consider her position as a mother, and her desire for Jackie to have a better life, contrasted with her personal feelings.
- Look for Margaret’s characteristic voice, perhaps a mix of pragmatism, emotional suppression, and underlying yearning.
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