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O-LevelLiterature in EnglishPoetry2010/12 · Oct/Nov 2017 · Q225 Marks

How does Sassoon vividly depict his experience of war in Attack? Attack At dawn the ridge emerges massed and dun In the wild purple of the glowering sun, Smouldering through spouts of drifting smoke that shroud The menacing scarred slope; and, one by one, Tanks creep and topple forward to the wire. The barrage roars and lifts. Then, clumsily bowed With bombs and guns and shovels and battle-gear, Men jostle and climb to meet the bristling fire. Lines of grey, muttering faces, masked with fear, They leave their trenches, going over the top, While time ticks blank and busy on their wrists, And hope, with furtive eyes and grappling fists, Flounders in mud. O Jesus, make it stop! (Siegfried Sassoon)

  1. How does Sassoon vividly depict his experience of war in Attack?[25]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2017). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. [AO1] show detailed knowledge of the content of literary texts, supported by reference to the text
  2. [AO2] understand the meanings of literary texts and their context, and explore texts beyond surface meaning to show deeper awareness of ideas and attitudes
  3. [AO3] recognise and appreciate ways in which writers use language, structure, and form to create and shape meanings and effects
  4. [AO4] communicate a sensitive and informed personal response to literary texts.

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Topic
Poetry, O-Level Literature in English (syllabus 2010). Structured question, 25 marks.
Source
O-Level Literature in English, Oct/Nov 2017 Paper 1 Variant 2, question 2.

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