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O-LevelLiterature in EnglishPoetry2010/12 · Oct/Nov 2015 · Q325 Marks

from JO PHILLIPS ed: Poems Deep & Dangerous Remember to support your ideas with details from the writing. Read this poem, and then answer the question that follows it: In Our Tenth Year This book, this page, this harebell laid to rest between these sheets, these leaves, if pressed still bleeds a watercolour of the way we were. Those years: the fuss of such and such a day, that disagreement and its final word, your inventory of names and dates and times, my infantries of tall, dark, handsome lies. A decade on, now we astound ourselves; still two, still twinned but doubled now with love and for a single night apart, alone, how sure we are, each of the other half. This harebell holds its own. Let’s give it now in air, in light, the chance to fade, to fold. Here, take it from my hand. Now, let it go. (Simon Armitage) In what ways does Armitage memorably portray the speaker’s feelings in In Our Tenth Year?

  1. In what ways does Armitage memorably portray the speaker’s feelings in In Our Tenth Year?[25]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2015). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. [25-23] Answers in this band have all the qualities of Band 2 work, with further insight, sensitivity, individuality and flair.
  2. [25-23] They show sustained engagement with both text and task.
  3. [25-23] Sustains a perceptive, convincing and relevant personal response
  4. [25-23] • shows a clear critical understanding of the text
  5. [25-23] • responds sensitively and in detail to the way the writer achieves her/his effects
  6. [25-23] • integrates much well-selected reference to the text

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Topic
Poetry, O-Level Literature in English (syllabus 2010). Structured question, 25 marks.
Source
O-Level Literature in English, Oct/Nov 2015 Paper 1 Variant 2, question 3.

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