You are Raleigh. You have left the dugout after Stanhope has seized your letter and ordered you to inspect your rifles. Write your thoughts.
- (a)You are Raleigh. You have left the dugout after Stanhope has seized your letter and ordered you to inspect your rifles. Write your thoughts.[25]
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- Raleigh is clearly in a state of distress and the reasons for this are obvious.
- He has been humiliated by his hero.
- He has seen a side of Stanhope he never could have imagined to be there.
- Perhaps most hurtful and humiliating though, given that he is a public schoolboy who has been taught to keep his emotions well under wraps, is to have his hero worship for Stanhope revealed to the object of his worship.
- Will he be angry? Probably not, bewildered no doubt.
- However, perhaps we should allow some spark as he leaves his school days behind.
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