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O-LevelLiterature in EnglishPoetry2010/12 · May/June 2022 · Q325 Marks

SECTION A: POETRY SONGS OF OURSELVES VOLUME 2: from Part 4 Remember to support your ideas with details from the writing. Either 3 Read this poem, and then answer the question that follows it: Waterfall I do not ask for youth, nor for delay in the rising of time's irreversible river that takes the jewelled arc of the waterfall in which I glimpse, minute by glinting minute, all that I have and all I am always losing as sunlight lights each drop fast, fast falling. I do not dream that you, young again, might come to me darkly in love's green darkness where the dust of the bracken spices the air moss, crushed, gives out an astringent sweetness and water holds our reflections motionless, as if for ever. It is enough now to come into a room and find the kindness we have for each other calling it love – in eyes that are shrewd but trustful still, face chastened by years of careful judgement; to sit in the afternoons in mild conversation, without nostalgia. But when you leave me, with your jauntiness sinewed by resolution more than strength suddenly then I love you with a quick intensity, remembering that water, however luminous and grand, falls fast and only once to the dark pool below. (Lauris Edmond)

  1. (a)How does Edmond movingly convey the passing of time in this poem?[25]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2022). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. demonstrates knowledge by incorporating well-selected reference to the text skilfully and with flair (AO1)
  2. sustains a critical understanding of the text showing individuality and insight (AO2)
  3. responds sensitively and in considerable detail to the way the writer achieves her / his effects (AO3)
  4. sustains personal and evaluative engagement with task and text (AO4)

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Topic
Poetry, O-Level Literature in English (syllabus 2010). Structured question, 25 marks.
Source
O-Level Literature in English, May/June 2022 Paper 1 Variant 2, question 3.

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