Desai frequently portrays people who live in a state of irritation and anger. Explore how she does this so memorably in Private Tuition by Mr Bose or Pigeons at Daybreak.
- (a)Desai frequently portrays people who live in a state of irritation and anger. Explore how she does this so memorably in Private Tuition by Mr Bose or Pigeons at Daybreak.[25]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2010). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [25] Mr. Bose, a man of deep sensibility, lives in a state of perpetual irritation as he attempts to make a very basic living as a tutor, constantly faced by the lazy, the dim, the socially superior and the sexually alluring.
- [25] Mr. Basu is a memorable picture of the terrors of an asthmatic whose illness has led him into making constant demands on those around him.
- [25] As usual the key word in the task is memorable.
- [25] Hopefully most candidates will be able to chart some of the relevant detail of their chosen story but even for reasonable reward candidates should offer more than description.
- [25] We should be able to discern some understanding of how the writer's words bring to life the frustrations of these lives, frustrations which breed such anger.
- [25] The more that is central to the answer, the higher the reward.
- [25] Refer to the band descriptors in arriving at your mark.
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