Describe the scene at two competitions, one which takes place outdoors and one which takes place indoors.

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2025). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

1. [10] Content and Structure (W1, W2) - Level 5: Consistently effective response to the task. A wide range of descriptive or narrative features used to create a consistently effective response. Structure is clear, well balanced and carefully organised for deliberate effect.
2. [15] Style and Accuracy (W3, W5) - Level 5: Uses a wide range of well-constructed sentences accurately, including complex sentences. Precise and effective use of a wide range of vocabulary. Highly accurate use of complex spelling, punctuation and grammar.
3. Candidates may use some of the following features (Descriptions): Focus: e.g. change from close at hand, to in the distance, or very detailed to impressionistic. Atmosphere: e.g. welcoming, foreboding, pleasing, either uniform or varying. Direction: e.g. opposite views from a high viewpoint. Senses: sight, touch, hearing, smell (but weaker candidates do it too mechanically). Contrast (especially beyond any contrast given in the question). Reactions of observer. Setting and people within the setting. Minimal or no narrative framework. Figurative language techniques e.g. simile, metaphor, personification. Sound devices e.g. onomatopoeia, alliteration, assonance. And how the response is all linked together to make a cohesive picture.