'In order to have a positive effect on society, it is far more important to be kind than to be clever.' Do you think this is true? Give reasons and examples to support your view.

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2023). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

1. [30] Language - Band 8: Highly accurate writing, apart from very occasional slips. Sentence structures varied for particular effects. Verb forms largely correct and appropriate tenses consistently used. Vocabulary wide and precise. Punctuation accurate and helpful. Spelling accurate, apart from very occasional slips. Paragraphs have unity, are linked, and show evidence of planning.
2. [30] Appropriateness and Content - Band 8 (Argument): Consistently relevant. Interest aroused and sustained. Tone and register entirely appropriate. Arguments are well developed, logical, even complex.