Describe two events you went to, one of which was much better than you expected and one of which was disappointing. (Remember you are describing the places, the atmosphere and any people, as well as the events.)

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2023). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

1. [30] Language - Band 8: Highly accurate writing, apart from very occasional slips. Sentence structures varied for particular effects. Verb forms largely correct and appropriate tenses consistently used. Vocabulary wide and precise. Punctuation accurate and helpful. Spelling accurate, apart from very occasional slips. Paragraphs have unity, are linked, and show evidence of planning.
2. [30] Appropriateness and Content - Band 8 (Description): Consistently relevant. Interest aroused and sustained. Tone and register entirely appropriate. Descriptions have well-developed images helping to create complex atmosphere.