From paragraph 4
- (a)In what two ways was the writer's decision to take Hortense not wise? (i) (ii)[2]
- (b)In what way can we tell that the writer wasn't sure his mother would allow him to take Hortense?[1]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2019). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [1] (a)(i) He didn't ask / should have asked his mother('s permission) // he should have / didn't talk to his mother (about it) // he didn't tell / should have told his mother (about it)
- [1] (a)(ii) he hadn't seen him / it / the deer // he didn't know what the deer looked like
- [1] (b) He rehearsed / practised / went over his story / what he would say (to her over and over again) // he made up a story that would soften / melt her heart / a heart of stone
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