Read Passage 1, Cars, in the Insert and answer all the questions below.
- (a)Notes Identify and write down the information in the passage which describes the changes created by the car and the disadvantages the car has brought. USE MATERIAL FROM THE WHOLE PASSAGE. At this stage, you do not need to use your own words. Use note form. To help you get started, the first point in each section of notes is done for you. You may find it helpful to use bullet points when listing the content points. You will be awarded up to 12 marks for content points. Content Points The changes created by the car • Freedom of mobility The disadvantages the car has brought • Fuel (they burn) gives off pollutants which can weaken the body's defences against diseases[12]
- (b)Summary Now use your notes from 1(a) to write a summary of the changes created by the car and the disadvantages the car has brought, as outlined in the passage. Use your own words as far as possible. You will be awarded marks for producing a piece of writing which is relevant, well organised and easy to follow. Your summary must be in continuous writing (not note form). You are advised to write between 150 and 180 words, including the 10 words given below. The invention of the car created a revolution because it[10]
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2018). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- [12] 1(a) Content Points. Passage 1 Cars. Identify and write down the information in the passage which describes the changes created by the car and the disadvantages the car has brought. 1 mark for each correct point up to a maximum of 12 marks. Award marks in any order. The changes created by the car:
- [1] 1 Freedom of mobility (given)
- [1] 2 makes travel / journey(s) fast(er) // speed / increased speed of travel / journey(s) // travel / journey(s) take less time (than on foot) Allow lift of lines 4–5 'a journey...by car' (needs inclusion of 'on foot') Not Allowed Responses: 'ease' for 'speed'
- [1] 3 great(er) social interaction /wide(r) circle of friends / increased communication with family
- [1] 4 (greater) flexibility in work // possible to live in the country and work in town // those living in towns / cities could go further afield to work // working in distant areas became easy / easier / possible
- [1] 5 sprawling / large(r) urban areas / (modern) cities (resulted)
- [1] 6 (the car changed) appearance of (whole) countries because of road-building schemes / new roads / extending (existing) roads
- [1] 7 door-to-door trips // makes door-to-door trips possible / easy
- [1] 8 (manufacturing / production provides) much employment / many jobs / jobs for many people Not Allowed Responses: Examples of Ford factory production / 19 000 000 in India (alone) '(over)19 000 000' for 'many people'
- The disadvantages the car has brought:
- [1] 9 Fuel (they burn) gives off pollutants which damage the body's defences against diseases (given)
- [1] 10 damage to the environment // (emits) greenhouse gases // (causes) global warming // damages the ozone layer
- [1] 11 (Over) a million / millions of / many / people involved in road / traffic / car accidents // over a million / many / frequent road / traffic / car accidents Allow 'killed / injured' for 'involved' Not Allowed Responses: Increase in road/car/traffic accidents (alone) Several/some (accidents/people) for 'many'
- [1] 12 (whole) communities destroyed / devastated when (car) factories close Not Allowed Responses: 'affected' for 'destroyed'
- [1] 13 makes / might make people less inclined to (take) exercise // people don't (take) exercise Not Allowed Responses: 'sport' for 'exercise'
- [1] 14 driving is (often) stressful Not Allowed Responses: Examples of stress, e.g. 'exasperation' and 'road rage'
- [1] 15 (car / driving encourages) anti-social behaviour
- [1] 16 (cars cause) congestion / traffic jams (in cities) Allow lift of lines 46–7 'many modern cities...common' and run on into 'particularly...work' Not Allowed Responses: 'congestion at rush hours' (alone) Many cities can barely cope with the volume of traffic (alone)
- [10] 1(b) Summary Candidates have now fleshed out their notes into a piece of formal, continuous prose. Candidates are advised to write between 150-180 words including the 10 words given. Marks are awarded for producing a piece of writing which is relevant and well-organised and easy to follow. Summary - Task Fulfilment 10 marks Band 5 (9-10) Excellent understanding of the task demonstrated in an impressive response: All content included is relevant, with no unnecessary details/repetitions. Fluent and coherent presentation of the points, including possible synthesising where appropriate, and a wide range of appropriate stylish linking devices. Band 4 (7-8) Good understanding of the task demonstrated in a skilful response: Almost all content included is relevant, with only occasional unnecessary details/repetitions. Generally fluent and coherent presentation of the points, with appropriate linking devices. Band 3 (5-6) Acceptable understanding of the task demonstrated in a competent response: Some of the content included is relevant, with unnecessary details/additions. Satisfactory presentation of the points with limited fluency and coherence and occasional misuse of linking devices. Band 2 (3-4) Insecure understanding of the task demonstrated in a rather faltering response: Content included is of limited relevance, with frequent unnecessary details/repetitions. Presentation of the points breaks down, with little coherence and lacking linking devices. Band 1 (1-2) Very little understanding of the task demonstrated in an incoherent response: Content included is of little relevance, with noticeably unnecessary details/repetitions. Little attempt to present the points with no concept of linking devices. Band 0 (0) No understanding of the task demonstrated in: A totally irrelevant response. Insufficient material to reward.
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