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O-LevelEnglish LanguageComposition1123/12 · Oct/Nov 2014 · Q530 Marks

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Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (Oct/Nov 2014). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. [30] Total marks for this part: 30. Primary emphasis is on quality of Language; comments on Content used to adjust mark within Band.
  2. [0] Section 2 Language (Band 1): Highly accurate, apart from very occasional slips. Sentence structure varied for particular effects. Verb forms largely correct and appropriate tenses consistently used. Vocabulary wide and precise. Punctuation accurate and helpful. Spelling accurate apart from very occasional slips. Paragraphs have unity, are linked, and show evidence of planning.
  3. [0] Section 2 Content (Band 1 - General): Consistently relevant. Interest aroused and sustained. Tone and register entirely appropriate. (Depending on the approach - descriptive, discursive, or narrative - specific content criteria will apply from Band 1).

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Topic
Composition, O-Level English Language (syllabus 1123). Structured question, 30 marks.
Source
O-Level English Language, Oct/Nov 2014 Paper 1 Variant 2, question 5.

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