O-LevelEnglish LanguageComposition1123/22 · May/June 2024 · Q425 Marks

OR Narrative writing Write a story in which someone unexpectedly receives a very nice gift.

Content and StructureWrite a story in which someone unexpectedly receives a very nice gift. Write about 350 to 450 words. Up to 10 marks are available for the content and structure of your answer.[10]
Style and AccuracyUp to 15 marks are available for the style and accuracy of your writing.[15]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2024). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

[Section B Composition: Content and Structure Level 5] Consistently effective response to the task (Marks: 9-10)
[Section B Composition: Content and Structure Level 5] A wide range of descriptive or narrative features used to create a consistently effective response. (W1) (Marks: 9-10)
[Section B Composition: Content and Structure Level 5] Structure is clear, well balanced and carefully organised for deliberate effect. (W2) (Marks: 9-10)
[Section B Composition: Style and Accuracy Level 5] Uses a wide range of well-constructed sentences accurately, including complex sentences. (W3) (Marks: 13-15)
[Section B Composition: Style and Accuracy Level 5] Precise and effective use of a wide range of vocabulary. (W3) (Marks: 13-15)
[Section B Composition: Style and Accuracy Level 5] Highly accurate use of complex spelling, punctuation and grammar. (W5) (Marks: 13-15)

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