'Parents should insist that their children do extra-curricular activities such as attending school clubs or sports training, even when the children don't want to.' How far do you agree with this? Give reasons and details to support your view.

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2022). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

1. [30] Language Band 8: Highly accurate writing, apart from very occasional slips.
2. [30] Language Band 8: Sentence structures varied for particular effects.
3. [30] Language Band 8: Verb forms largely correct and appropriate tenses consistently used.
4. [30] Language Band 8: Vocabulary wide and precise.
5. [30] Language Band 8: Punctuation accurate and helpful.
6. [30] Language Band 8: Spelling accurate, apart from very occasional slips.
7. [30] Language Band 8: Paragraphs have unity, are linked, and show evidence of planning.
8. [30] Appropriateness and Content Band 8: Consistently relevant. Interest aroused and sustained.
9. [30] Appropriateness and Content Band 8: Tone and register entirely appropriate.
10. [30] Appropriateness and Content Band 8: Arguments are well developed, logical, even complex.