Edexcel IGCSEEnglish LanguageGeneral Applications10 Marks
'Despite the hardships, there's an undeniable allure.' Using your own words, explain how the writer presents the 'allure' of Oakhaven.
Mark scheme
Marking points from the official mark scheme. The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.
- Level 1 (1-2 marks): Limited understanding; relies on direct quotation or paraphrase without explanation.
- Level 2 (3-4 marks): Some understanding; identifies some appealing aspects but explanation is basic. May not fully be in own words.
- Level 3 (5-7 marks): Clear understanding; explains several appealing aspects using own words. Some development of ideas.
- Level 4 (8-10 marks): Thorough understanding; comprehensively explains the 'allure' using sophisticated vocabulary and insightful development of ideas. Fully in own words.
- Indicative content may include:
- The natural beauty/pristine environment (unpolluted night sky, children playing freely).
- The slower pace of life, escape from urban stresses.
- The strong sense of community, mutual support, close-knit relationships.
- Opportunities for connection with nature.
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