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O-LevelLiterature in EnglishDrama2010/11 · May/June 2011 · Q425 Marks

CHARLOTTE KEATLEY: My Mother Said I Never Should Read the following extract, and then answer the question that follows it: Doris: The rug will do quite nicely for me. (Sits.) Sit down and have some tea. Margaret: Oh we mustn't, I said to Ken we'd be ready to leave as soon Doris: as he comes back. Her bag is packed and in the hall. Margaret: If we stay for tea we won't get home to London till way past 5 Jackie's bedtime. Jackie: I don't mind. Doris: Jackie made the cakes. Didn't you dear? Pause. Margaret gives in to pressure and sits. 10 Margaret: All right Mother. And what have you been doing, darling? Jackie: I broke a cup and then we broke two jam jars. Margaret: Oh dear. Doris: Jackie's been an angel. Jackie: (offering the cake) Have the yellow one with the smartie. 15 Doris: I hope you've been taking the iron tablets, dear. Margaret: (resists temptation to answer back. To JACKIE, for the cake) Thank you. Jackie: (says grace in French, very fast) Que Dieu benisse nôtre pain quotidien. Amen. (Pause.) 20 Margaret: Well this is very nice. Doris: And how was Windermere? Did you drive about much? Margaret: We stayed in a lovely guest house, a bit pricey but Ken insisted I was pampered. Jackie: What's pampered? 25 Doris: Nursed. Pause. Jackie looks at Margaret. Margaret looks at Doris. Margaret: No, pampered is – being spoiled a bit – like you've been, here! Doris: Thank you, Margaret. 30 Margaret: And I brought you some Kendal mint cake! (Gives it to Jackie.) Jackie: And some for Granny? Never mind Granny, we can share this. (Breaks it in half and gives half to Doris, then goes back to her painting.) 35 Doris: I hope you didn't do too much walking. Margaret: It rained a lot. Luckily there was a nice lounge with a fire. Time to sit and think. You know, Mother, I thought I didn't want it, till I lost it. (Pause.) It's been a blessing, you taking Jackie for the week. But I missed you, darling! 40 Jackie: (goes and hugs Margaret) I cried the first night, didn't I Granny, then at breakfast Grandad let me have your old napkin ring. Margaret: (holds her) Oh Jackie. Jackie: And your doll. It's like a real baby, it's got real curled up toes and fingers. I was practising. I bathed it and put it to sleep, and it shut its eyes. 45 Margaret: No! (Gets up.) Doris: Mummy – Jackie - (Catch hold of her.) I didn't break her, I didn't break the doll! Jackie: Doris: (comforts) Ssh ssh – 50 Jackie: You're hurting! (Breaks free and runs off, knocking the paint pot across the painting.) Doris: If you hadn't been so hasty to get that temping job, you would never have lost the baby. 55 Margaret: (busying herself with the painting). It'll dry in the evening sun, it'll be all right. In what ways does Keatley reveal the feelings of Margaret and Doris here?

  1. In what ways does Keatley reveal the feelings of Margaret and Doris here?[25]

Mark scheme

Marking points from the official mark scheme (May/June 2011). The mark or mark type is shown in brackets.

  1. Candidates should analyse the extract to show how Keatley uses dialogue, stage directions, and implicit actions to reveal the complex feelings between Margaret and Doris.
  2. Focus on the underlying tension and unspoken resentments.
  3. Doris’s controlling nature (insisting they stay, comments about iron tablets, her jab about Margaret losing the baby).
  4. Margaret’s resistance and politeness giving way to thinly veiled sarcasm (‘like you’ve been here!’), her defensiveness, and guilt over Jackie.
  5. Jackie’s role in mediating or exacerbating the tension (sharing cake, doll revelation).
  6. The contrast between outward pleasantries and underlying bitterness.

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Topic
Drama, O-Level Literature in English (syllabus 2010). Structured question, 25 marks.
Source
O-Level Literature in English, May/June 2011 Paper 1 Variant 1, question 4.

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