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The Persuasive Arsenal: Writing A* Speeches

By Sarah Mitchell, MA·Updated April 18, 2026
A vintage wooden podium with a microphone, surrounded by aggressively handwritten speech drafts.

How do I get incredible Language marks in a Speech?

You must actively weaponize 'Rhetorical Devices'. The examiner actively scans your essay looking for the 4 core tricks: 1) Rhetorical Questions ('Are we really going to stand by and watch this happen?'). 2) The Rule of Three ('We demand justice, freedom, and equality'). 3) Emotive Language ('This vile, toxic proposal will shatter our community'). 4) Direct Inclusive Pronouns ('This is OUR school, and WE must protect it').

When Directed Writing asks for a formatted 'Speech', the examiner expects extreme passion. Merely writing an essay and throwing 'Good Morning' at the top isn't enough. You must write like a politician. This guide from our Ultimate O-Level English Guide gives you the exact psychological tools to manipulate the reader.

1. The Physical Format of a Speech

A speech is a live, spoken piece of audio text. It has entirely different rules to a quiet, private letter.

The Welcoming Hook

You must instantly identify exactly who you are speaking to based on the prompt. If the prompt says "Give a speech to the local town council", opening with "Hey guys!" guarantees a fail.
A* Opening: "Good evening, esteemed members of the council, and concerned citizens of our beautiful town."

The Grateful Sign-off

Unlike a physical letter, you do not sign a speech. You bow and leave the podium.
A* Sign-off: "I implore you all to reconsider. Thank you for your time and undivided attention."

2. The 4 Essential Rhetorical Devices

Do not write a single speech without artificially injecting these 4 powerful literary weapons.

1. The Rule of Three (Tricolon)

The human brain subconsciously loves rhythms of three. Placing three powerful adjectives in a row creates insane emphasis.
"This new policy is entirely unnecessary, deeply unfair, and fundamentally broken."

2. Direct Inclusive Pronouns

Stop saying 'I'. Say 'We'. You want to emotionally drag the audience onto your side against a common enemy.
"Are WE going to simply sit exactly where WE are, while OUR rights are stripped away?"

3. The Rhetorical Question

A question designed NOT to be answered, but to forcefully plant a heavy thought inside the audience's brain.
"Can you honestly look your children in the eyes and tell them we did nothing to stop the climate crisis?"

4. Intense Emotive Vocabulary

Never use neutral words in a speech. If something is bad, do not call it 'bad'. Call it 'venomous', 'toxic', 'catastrophic', or 'devastating'.

💡 Tutor's Tip
The Danger of Hyperbole: It is brilliant to exaggerate (Hyperbole) in a speech, but keep it logically grounded. Writing "If the school shuts down the swimming pool, 500 children will literally die of sadness" is so ridiculous the examiner will violently penalize your tone for being inappropriately comedic.

3. The Power of the Counter-Argument

This is the ultimate 'Level 5' trick used by actual political speechwriters. To seem incredibly intelligent, you must temporarily admit that your enemy has a point—and then violently crush their point.

The 'Strawman' Takedown

"Now, I know some of you in this room will argue that building the new factory will bring much-needed jobs to our town. And you are correct; jobs are vital. HOWEVER, what good is a paycheck if our children are breathing violently toxic fumes every single day? The minor economic benefit is utterly dwarfed by the catastrophic medical consequences."

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The Pacing Rule (Anaphora): If you want to build incredible dramatic momentum towards your climax, use Anaphora: The deliberate repetition of the exact same starting phrase across three sentences.
"We must act now. We must unite together. We must never surrender." This creates a powerful, beating drum rhythm inside the examiner's head.

Frequently Asked Questions

How MUST a speech begin and end?
Begin by verbally welcoming the explicit targeted audience ('Good morning teachers'). End by thanking them ('Thank you for your time').
What is the Rule of Three?
Listing exactly three powerful, aggressive adjectives in a row to subconsciously burn the point into the reader's memory.
What is Anaphora?
The highly deliberate repetition of the exact same word at the beginning of consecutive sentences ('We will fight. We will win.').
Why use direct inclusive pronouns?
Using 'we', 'us', and 'our' psychologically tricks the massive audience into believing you are allied together against a common threat.

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